Writing exam 4
Paragraph 1:The Armor
One day, I checked the mailbox. their was a package that was for me. I came back to my house and open the package. It was a armor. It was Black and Gold. It covered the whole body and it was made out of metal. the mask covered your head except for the eyes. I knew that this was not just any armor it is a armor that could send you back in the time because I put it on. when I put it on I felt powerful. then all of a sudden the room started to shake and spin until I was on mount Olympus.
Paragraph 2: Back in the Past
On Mount Olympus I saw a big palace made out of gold. there were lots of water and the statue of 11 major gods. I was surprised and I decided to explore the palace. I ran as fast as a cheetah around the palace. I said the magic words. then I went inside and try to find the person that send me that armor. the package didn't have a name of the person who sent it to me.
Paragraph 3:Meet Hephaistos
So I check my armor to find out who sent it to me. I knew there was only one person that made this type of armor. I said to myself, "it has to be Hephaistos the god of fire, volcanoes, blacksmiths and craftworkers." I ran to his palace and asked, why did you send it to me. Hephaistos said I've been waiting for you. I said thank you for sending that armor and why did you sent it to me.
Paragraph 4: Hephaistos Explains
Hephaistos explained I built the armor to go back in the past in case Cronus attacks . We need your help to defeat Cronus. Your a Titan and you must stay. Hephaistos said there are seven hero's you are the first one. six of the Titans are remain. You are the leader. You need to defeat cronus. He gave me a wepon and was a golden Sword.
Paragraph 5: Attacked
It was time to attack Cronus. Hephaistos said to me be careful in the battle and you have the power to stop him. He went to his hideout. Cronus saw him and was about to attack him. He dodge the attack and said Cronus. ah look at here. Only one titan and the others have to be here right now. I thought that there were seven. Nice but try I'm going to defeat you. then their wasn't more time I have to come back with heavy materials.
Paragraph 6: Home
Well did you it said Hephaistos. I said no I can't fight alone. I guess your right I have build more armor to the other titans. I'll help you can't do it alone I said. I guess your right about it I can't do it alone I need a other blacksmith. here the packages for the other titans. and the seven of you guys will defeat Cronus.
One day, I checked the mailbox. their was a package that was for me. I came back to my house and open the package. It was a armor. It was Black and Gold. It covered the whole body and it was made out of metal. the mask covered your head except for the eyes. I knew that this was not just any armor it is a armor that could send you back in the time because I put it on. when I put it on I felt powerful. then all of a sudden the room started to shake and spin until I was on mount Olympus.
Paragraph 2: Back in the Past
On Mount Olympus I saw a big palace made out of gold. there were lots of water and the statue of 11 major gods. I was surprised and I decided to explore the palace. I ran as fast as a cheetah around the palace. I said the magic words. then I went inside and try to find the person that send me that armor. the package didn't have a name of the person who sent it to me.
Paragraph 3:Meet Hephaistos
So I check my armor to find out who sent it to me. I knew there was only one person that made this type of armor. I said to myself, "it has to be Hephaistos the god of fire, volcanoes, blacksmiths and craftworkers." I ran to his palace and asked, why did you send it to me. Hephaistos said I've been waiting for you. I said thank you for sending that armor and why did you sent it to me.
Paragraph 4: Hephaistos Explains
Hephaistos explained I built the armor to go back in the past in case Cronus attacks . We need your help to defeat Cronus. Your a Titan and you must stay. Hephaistos said there are seven hero's you are the first one. six of the Titans are remain. You are the leader. You need to defeat cronus. He gave me a wepon and was a golden Sword.
Paragraph 5: Attacked
It was time to attack Cronus. Hephaistos said to me be careful in the battle and you have the power to stop him. He went to his hideout. Cronus saw him and was about to attack him. He dodge the attack and said Cronus. ah look at here. Only one titan and the others have to be here right now. I thought that there were seven. Nice but try I'm going to defeat you. then their wasn't more time I have to come back with heavy materials.
Paragraph 6: Home
Well did you it said Hephaistos. I said no I can't fight alone. I guess your right I have build more armor to the other titans. I'll help you can't do it alone I said. I guess your right about it I can't do it alone I need a other blacksmith. here the packages for the other titans. and the seven of you guys will defeat Cronus.
Reflection sheet
1. Give a 3 to 5 sentence description of the project. Use the Standard as a reference.
2. Tell what you did first, second and third to complete and do well on the project?
3. In 2-3 sentences write down what you liked about and could improve on this assignment.
4. In 1-2 sentences to describe how you will use the skills you learned in doing this project out in either the real world, when you are an adult or in other classes while you are still a student?
2. Tell what you did first, second and third to complete and do well on the project?
3. In 2-3 sentences write down what you liked about and could improve on this assignment.
4. In 1-2 sentences to describe how you will use the skills you learned in doing this project out in either the real world, when you are an adult or in other classes while you are still a student?